Really liked the choice of music here, I feel like it helps set the mood for your story a lot. The art is great, although I was expecting some animation and was a little disappointed that it was lacking animation.
Made me feel like I was watching my brother play final fantasy when I was a kid. I dig your story. Keep it up! Would love to see this fully animated, like a silent film. The music just sets the scenes so well I almost feel like dialogue could get in the way.