i felt delight in watching this , but it lacked something concrete the girl who apeared now and then wasnt payed to much attention to and felt the lack of aspiration.
no crackling joke or facepalm moments
and the time laps between each scene didnt overlap the next with a 2 second period of nothing to fill the void.
but seeing this is simular like Metal Gear Awesome.
my advice is to copy the rythmatic how its played out the quick overlapping scenes the funny transcending cartoon styles back and forth.
the jokes sometimes funny but simple , if you try that im sure it will work out for you guys in the next movie you bring forth
3/5 drawing is there but ...not yet fully perfected