I see promise in this. I think it will turn out quite well, keep up the good work.
Reviews for "Kaigan: SC -- Episode 1"
nice job, very impressive. keep up the good work. Having said that, i feel like some mistakes Im sure you noticed were still overlooked. One scene in the middle where the bottom of the girl jacket was not colored in, and when she put her hand on the tree at the end seemed poorly drawn especially since everything else was so well drawn. hope i was hulpfull. keep it up.
It is really good for a amature production esspecially one person doing it all but this thing feels like a competition to fit in every anime cliche as fast as possible as many times as possible. You use gestures that are derived from anime so often and so fast at times they don't even all make sense.
good animating you should make more and not leave people in suspense
You've done well my friend. Keep up the good work!