Pretty good...
This is pretty good...For being your first flash its REALLY good, However, you could shortened the launching sequence...Also you could have put in a fight showing the fight and the destruction of either parts(or both). But this was pretty good.
cool
well not bad for your first, hmm, good little story, and tons of action, great flick...
not bad.. great for a first try..
this was very good for a first time..
Not too bad man
Not too bad. Not terribly original. I thought it was a good job. There's a lot of crap being uploaded to NG and that sux but I don't think this one sux. It's pretty decent. If you make another please make it a sequle to this one!
Nice and original...
Finally a good flash that the author took more than a few minutes to think up. Most portal entries I've seen in the last few days have been utter crap. There were a few good ones, but far too amny were utter crap. Make more like this, decent flashes are something everyone can enjoy.