dug that fight scene, awesome !
Reviews for "Dual Force"
I'm not a jerk, YOU'RE THE JERK.
But anyways, I definitely like this toon. I'm not sure what it is, the idea of death just hanging out with some dude he's gotta wait to kill, or the fact that he didn't hesitate after all the fun they had together. I see too much of the "Nooo, I grew too attached to this guy, I can't KILL him." in cartoons so this was a nice change of pace. Though one could say it was just useless filler then, but I dunno, it was good filler.
The main things that made me laugh in this cartoon were actually the littler things. Death sitting outside in the rain, Death taking the woman's soul and flying away, and even Aaron punching the eyeball and making it scream and explode was funny. Also, Jeffrey rocketing away when he took his chips.
Just the little things. But one of my big complaints is the different visuals. You mentioned it in the author's comments but I definitely think you should try working on smaller projects faster so that there's still some consistency to them, and then work on longer projects when you're able to retain the style.
Twisted4000 responds:
Ha ha I agree with like everything you said here, couldn't have said it better myself. I'm glad someone noticed all of the subtle little jokes I put in it, I like to have mini gags that sort of flow through the entire storyline but don't really draw too much attention to themselves. And yes, I've learned the hard way, I'm never making anything at this length again. But again thanks for the review, very well-put.
This turned out awesome man great voice work along with your sweet animation style to make a quality full length cartoon you WILL go far in animation
-Sean
Twisted4000 responds:
Thank you for your continued support.