Nice to see the story going somewhere now.
It seems to be coming along nice, but would it kill ya to put up some good backgrounds and actually make it look like an animation, it has more of a Panel-per-Panel Comic like feel to it. Hope you make some more, and better stuff. I trust you wil get better as time goes on, hell, most artists do.
It gets better right here
Well this part gets a little better because you used the theme song from tenchi and Ryoko comes in just perfectly heh. Deus and Ryoko would make a great team at killing pokemon I can't wait to see what happens in Deus 3 man keep up the good work.
MORE MORE!!!!
i loved it!!i cant get enough of it!make more more more!!
That Sucked....................
That can only be sum up in two words "sucks ass".
It was good
You did a good job on it,but it should be longer...oh,and use Ryoko again,cuz she just kicks ass.