It seems like you have a vendatta against the common gamer girl. As someone who once shared your thoughts, I'd like to inform you that flashes like this only degrade women and do not stop the type of gamer girl you loath from continuing from seeking approval online. If anything please remember that there are many other gamer girls online that just choose not to say something out of fear of being treated differently and insulting the ones that do speak out only further alienates other women from interacting online.
Putting that aside, the flash itself was poorly animated but had many thought out scenes. Your lack of animating skills did not prevent you from doing what too many flash artist chose to do and stick with one scene for too long. It wasn't static, and this is a plus.
The sound was pretty okay, nothing too special but at least it was varied. Make sure to try to level out the VA work though, the levels were pretty off for your VAs.
The artwork itself was also very bland but not much is expected here on NG. It would be great if you could improve on your style a bit further but in all honesty it just seemed like you tried to draw characters aren't werent too concerned about uniqueness. That isn't a bad thing but your art did not come out so good so it being very unstylized makes it just look bland.
I hope you continue to explore online interactions with your animations as I do really enjoy commentary on the subject, just please try to spend some more time on the subject yourself before hand. The quality of your work will surely improve.
Snkz, the old king of reviewers.