Well done all round! And i hope too see "round 2" someday:)
Reviews for "M.S.A.: Fluttertime!"
I'm giving it a four out of five for one reason only, and that reason is you cut off the second part. Hahaha. But really, loved the artwork, appreciated the gameplay format, and thought the animation of the Rainbow Dash picture you did was a great touch. I would really suggest posting that animation of her on here separate from the game. And now that that's all covered, go back and re-read your dialogue to correct flow and some minor spelling errors. Keep up the good work!
Fatelogic responds:
Well, I thought that leaving a cliffhanger would be an interesting added flavor to the mix xD Besides, the game is dangerously big (19.5MB when the limit is 20MB), so I could hardly fit a pin inside it xD That's why some content I was expecting to add had to be left out, but oh well, it still holds up.
Yeah, I'll recheck the spelling after a good rest and correct some minor details ^^ Glad u liked the game :D
Well done and the ending actually left me wanting the next part. I caught a few spelling errors but who doesn't have those. The scenes as well were varied enough. We all know Flutter is the hottest one out there.
Fatelogic responds:
Thx pal ^^ I'll do a spellcheck correction when I manage to get some time ^^
Pretty good stuff.
What I didn't like: The specific anthro styling threw me off a bit, but I was able to cope in the end. Generic porn plot and music are generic.
What I did like: The rest of it. Hot action, and a nice sequel hook Looking forward to more work.
Fatelogic responds:
Thanks for the feedback bro ^^
Yeah, the setting is kinda generic, but again, it's a 4 minutes long hentai game at most. A detailed, original storyline would be sort of hard to condense in such a short timeframe. I do write settings and stories for future Visual Novel projects, but they're concepts way too much bigger than what I can accomplish by myself (aka: without a production team).
I would say that the only thing we disagree is on the music. For me, Kevin McLeod is a wonderful composer, but in music there's ample room for discrepancy, so don't sweat it ^^
Anyway, thanks for your comment once again ^^
Aww this is such a cool game. And you're welcome.
Fatelogic responds:
:D Thx