good music mystery!
although your graphics are not very good, which will make in the history enfatises ave ..
I like a phoenix bird design ...
follows if!
good work ..
I give you ... 4/5, 5/5
Reviews for "ASHTRAY"
Pepeto responds:
Thanks for the review!
Pretty smooth animation. I don't like your art style that much but who am I to complain. The music really compliments the animation I must say. I would've liked a preloader but I don't really mind. Pretty Good!
Pepeto responds:
Hey and thanks for the review! Well, you can't please everyone with your style :)
Very rough animation and not too pretty graphics here, but this doesn't mean that this flash is bad. Oh no, it's the "inner values" that count, right? I think the story is pretty nice here. Makes you think about all the little "miracles" that happen every day and that no one really notices.
Also, the musical choice is pretty good. I think the song fits very well to the movie. Some additional sound effects would've been nice, though.
The only thing that's really missing is a replay button. I just don't like it when a flash loops endlessly.
Overall, a good submission, with some minor flaws here and there. But still an enjoyable flash.
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Pepeto responds:
Thanks for your review! I've now edited the submission and added the replay button I forgot to put in the first place.
The animation was good but the video itself doesn't make much sense.
Pepeto responds:
Haha, it does to me, thank you
For this review I've done it properly, sat down with some popcorn and completely zoned out into the animation, which is very smooth and can't really be faulted but I wasn't the biggest fan of the art work, it seemed rushed and with little detail.
Another point I would like to bring up at this point is the looping which as I'm writing this is driving me insane and making me mute my laptop, it really needs to be changed so that it comes to a stop with a replay button. The last thing I will point out is that I really haven't a clue what is meant to be the point of this little tale, maybe some more time at the writing stage would have done it some good.
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Pepeto responds:
Thanks for this review too :) I have to admit I totally forgot to add the loading and play -buttons for this one as I just wanted to get over with uploading animation here as fast as I could. I'm thinking of adding them later when I have some time for it.