hehe cool
that was good, alot better then any stick film, great job...
Reviews for "Shadow: The Dream Pt. 1"
Pretty Neat!
Not too shabby! The animation is smooth and slick, the sound effects are spot on and the art is cool. Like Shadow mentioned, you don't need the "Next Scene" buttons since it slows down the action. Just go right on ahead to the next scene and let the fists fly. Clutch5000 also had a couple of good tips like the yellow "Alert" text is hard to read and the fights play like we're watching a video game. A couple of cool angles other than profile might add a bit more excitement to the fighting.
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All in all, this is a cool li'l Flash piece and I can't wait for you to start the series! Good job! Keep it coming!
pretty good movie!
maybe add some music in there and get rid of the next scene buttons. great animation otherwise
constructive
Good job. Its a nice start. You might want to change the yellow alert text to red because it's a little hard to read. Maybe some shots from the front perspective too. Overall good graphics and good flash. Keep at it.
nice
That was a pretty good movie i can see you've put some effort in it well keep it up.... im looking forward to see the next episode...
shadow2o6 responds:
Hey thanks :)