The animation technique itself was really good - definitely impressive, so was the sound/music.
I, however, am not a fan of the voice actor.. I understand the idea that you were going for (those 1950 informational videos they'd show in classrooms) but it got a bit dry after a while.
Also, I think this was meant to be funny but the demographic that this kind of humor would appeal to.. I'm not sure of.
Overall it was long, drawn out, not particularly funny, and a tad on the boring side.