I think this might, and I say might, have been enjoyable had the stop-motion animation not been so messy. When you do something like this you need to set the camera at a constant angle in a constant position. It looked like you were holding it trying to get a picture as close to the position of the last picture as possible. That's my main issue with this. The other stuff I have a problem with is making sure that you can understand what the heck is going on. I mean for example, it looked like he was just touching the real to the sound of the theme from the 2001: Space Odyssey. That made absolutely no sense at all. Please work on this before you post something and more than likely have friends spam it with good reviews to get it on the front page.
Reviews for "Lonely man by train track"
I REALLY enjoyed this. THIS is ironic and it plays upon itself and its style. A simple homeless man that can't leave the train tracks after his wife passed away. The story itself is rich because it's something OF drama but I wouldn't like to clarify it specifically as a drama because it's something more.....
Either way I love it! Fantastic job!
I loved this. Keep up the great work my friend
And so the Mark has come and the end of Newgrounds is at hand. atleast the Mayans where right
Well,
That was something.