Looks like Gabriel got hit a little too close to home here. I gave it a four because the production value, acting, and plot are all solid. I also appreciate the satire in it which was just a little too understated here, but overall a good job.
Reviews for "Valbrook: Mammaries"
insertnamehere85 responds:
Satire! First time anyone has included that in their critique. Thank you! I agree that it is a little understated. My humor can be so dry it is nonexistent.
That was way too short! And I mean that in a positive way. It has a high production value, and the time, energy and care spend on it really shine through. Again good work, this was highly enjoyable.
insertnamehere85 responds:
Thanks! I have made more of these "Quickies" before just as exercises for me and introductions of some of my characters. Next year I am planning on animating a 30 minute pilot for the real show. So hopefully people will be down for a huge story dating back to the Civil War!
Haha I really like the style of this flash.
The animation, sound quality, dialogue (although quite ridiculous!), as well as the narration. Nice touch.
The midgets voice is hilarious, and the plot is right up there with it!
I don't know why some people are whining about how "this video make so mad...dont know,make me sick..." Uhhh, ok... because THAT sentence really makes sense!
Anyway, keep up the great work, and I hope to witness more episodes in this awesome series!
insertnamehere85 responds:
Thank you! I don't expect everyone to like or even understand what I am doing with this series. I know I have a little more to learn when it comes to storytelling, but I hope to make this into something with a longer narrative.
This has good animation and good voice acting but it was more interesting than funny. Working on the comedy aspect is what you need to do.
insertnamehere85 responds:
Thanks. I am trying something a little different in the comedy section.
nice concept, great sound/voices
insertnamehere85 responds:
Thank yous