umm...great animation, and i lik the part where that guy gets mad bout the getting bitches part.
Reviews for "ComiX Episode One Pt One"
this need a second part because you left so much room for improvement
the animation was good but can be better ( especially with the necks)
and also can work in the jokes ( not too bad but ... can be better )
but anyways this have a lot of potential
The jokes weren't bad, and neither was the script. The character's emotions were felt, and the timing was good. There was definite improvment here. for the most part the character designs were nice, and the shading gave them a nice touch. Lil proportional things with the arms could give them more life though, as right now they look pretty blocky. Your mouth shapes were pretty good but the really square ones I wasn't fond of. your sense of motion was good and pretty right on, so props on that stuff. Some of your hands I did like but some of them could use work. Overall good improvment, but keep pushing yourself. Btw that's really shitty about your iMac =(
Keep at it dude!
please do something with the necks
good job on your flash. The chacter's were great the jokes were ok felt like they were rushed (like family going x2). The audio needs a bit of work since it was hard to hear the character's talk over the music. Slow down a bit and everything will be perfect . Also the story plot is great so far.