looking forward to actually seeing this as a game
looking forward to actually seeing this as a game
Thanks a lot :>.
I think your lighting and overall atmosphere was better than your actually, animation. You had some good animated parts, like the scar crows eye poping off and putting it back, but some of it was a little too stiff, the posing and the movements ( ex, the lip sync ) and really the whole overall design work. it was visually pleasing but id like to see you get a little more loose with your line work next time around, can really emphasis expressions and posing. Overall good work here though, and it flowed real nice in some parts, so good work, and good luck
Thanks! I'll remember that :>.
Very nice. but are you going to make a game of this?
Either a game or a series. Depends on time and if I can get a programmer lol.
Change the cutscene button to the PLAY button.
Its not a cutscene button if it doesnt take you to a cutscene menu
Great idea, nice story, voice acting and so on.
Some of the animation needs work. Her rolling pin needs to have WEIGHT, she's grabbing it from the smallest end, she has to carry that thing around not like a feather, but more like a lead weight.
You kind of did it with the scarecrow's green button. There some some recovery with her action there.
Yep I noticed that. Point noted, thanks for the review :>.