The realistic design of the protagonist and the lo-fi gabber music didn't really match up with each other, and the concept was 'Sue' played out and cheesy that my fucks flew south in hopes of more interest.
Anyway, technically the animation, graphics, syncing and screen-direction were nice, and the minigame also gave it a nice twist.
What I suggest you for next time is to either apply a more grotesque and simplistic art style for the characters, or choose a music theme with more emotional volume.