I suggest the same than the other comment, an ambient melodic break would totally take this track into a new level. It stands its ground on his own like this though, pretty good for a preview. My only complain is that the track is a tad too high in volume, i dont sense a lot of dynamics, every is kinda too strong, i can hear clearly every instrument though, i should tone the volume down (And the compression) in some of the tracks. Aside from that, really good.