Great voice acting, I think that the smoothness of the expressions could have been improved though.
Good poop joke!
Reviews for "Too Scared To Poop!"
I felt the load time we very long. The animation on the load screen looks nice. The background of the load screen also looked like you put some time into this. Other than that, it's a very nice load screen. *2 minutes later* I have now spent more time loading than the amount of time it will take to watch this movie. I had no idea that flash files, minus their music, can be such thick files. Ahh good the movie started now, but it's starting and stopping due to needing more loading time. The voice work and background sound and voice work sound top notice, kudos to your work on that....Now we're into a 6 minute wait and the movie still won't go through half of it without stopping... Man what did you put into this? I've downloaded movies off of pirate bay faster than this is uploading. It's taking the same amount of time to download this as a movie with marquee actors in it. So it's taking the same amount of time....minus anything marquee.... I know they say good things come to those who wait...and now I've waited 10 minutes...I'm just spouting off and writing stuff just because I haven't decided on what to do while I wait for this "neverending download" to finish downloading so I can view it's 2 minutes of content. We're now about 90% through the download and I've waited 13 minutes. Perhaps you need a stronger pre-loader...something where a user can play a full game of something while they wait for close to 15 minutes to watch all 2-3 minutes of this content. Ah! At last it's done! Again I liked the voice work and the ending music. It was a little unnecessarily gross when the kid crapped himself, and wasn't very funny with the kid getting sucked into the toilet. Overall I felt a little underwhelmed after waiting 15 minutes for 2 minutes of content.
Going forward my best suggestions to you is to put a little more care into your punch-line (where the desired effect is to scare or make your audience laugh). You've got some pretty decent skills at animating and drawing, but your story needs a strong finish or else all of your work results in something that's flat and uninteresting... like a can of coke left open for too long...
Don't take this slightly harsh review to heart too badly. In all fairness you did 2 out of 3 things right (as mentioned above) so just get those punch-lines and points hammer out and you'll see yourself getting better received.
SamGreen responds:
Thank you for your review, I have managed to edit the file so it now loads thrice as fast.
You did all that in 48 hrs? God, amazing job guys! Everything looked great and polished. Now, where can I buy a Bruna plushy? :3
Wow guys that was fantastic :D Such great polish, awesome voices and characters and the backgrounds were neat. Made me laugh. Good luck!
Good animation, funny story, awesome ending music. I like it a lot!