I don't feel that you really went any here with this. The art wasn't horrible, but it wasn't great either. The story pretty much consisted of a guy liking ketchup... not that interesting. Also, this was pretty short, some things can be done quickly and to the point yet leave you rolling on the floor laughing. This, I hate to say, truly evoked no emotion what so ever.
I think it would greatly help for you to actually come up with a concept, storyboard it, then animate it. Also, spend some time to teach yourself about art and animation, not that this was horrible in that regard, it was just somewhat lacking.
Just remember to keep on working at it and to not give up.