It was excellent, but I found one mistake, and I assume it wasn't intentional since it's usually an error in coding when using the movie-clip trick to bypass the 16k frame limit in flash. If a viewer accidently clicks the space-bar function on a dialouge box, it skips to the next scene. This is something you need to correct. And I'll give you the code on DA, also, I' quite flattered bro because I've noticed some similarities to DoD, like the ending clip picture.
Awesome work.
Quite nice work you have here. I say you should keep it up and work dilligently on the next episode. Now if I recall reading, this series is loosely based off of the archie comics. I don't read them myself cause I can't find source, so I could be wrong when I say this:
Looking off of the things I do know, which is about anything non-comic related, why make Shadow x Amy? I feel the relationship takes away what made those characters who they really were. Amy was an obsessed Sonic fan who was in love with him and do anything to make sure he was fine.
Shadow delved in his own past constantly, and while it -is- good to see him move from it, it's also bad he has a relationship to carry around as well since that isn't who he was.
(Aside from this each character is portrayed exactly as they should!)
Other than that, someone said earlier that it's very SMBZ like. Which is good and bad for its own reasons so I won't get into that. The plot is quite nice so far and I can't wait to see you continue and hopefully finish this series. Have a good one, the both of you!
P.S. I wish I could animate like this... If it were at all possible do you think you'd ever make tutorials or teach someone? Not asking about myself personally but I'd really love to get into these things someday. I do sprite comics and that's about it - I have a decent sprite edit too so if you ever need a cameo character you can ask me and I'll submit my fan-character.
Interesting Plot, Very Thrilling Fight Scenes, and Comedy.
Very well made bro :)
Interesting series! It had some let downs though. So, like some many artist nowadays, there are way too many references to SMBZ, like effects, dialog boxes, the same dramatic music on the talk between Shadow and Sonic, etc. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, in fact the whole movie itself it's almost flawless for a sprite movie. But the fact that you are using all of that, it takes away some originality to your movie itself!
The second one was already mentioned... I don't know if it's your intention, but as I press Spacebar, it skips scene instead of skipping dialog. I wasn't able to watch the whole movie...
Anyway, good work!
I honestly think the animation is OKAY for an 8-bit style game, it needs work with the audio but all in all its cool. Problem is... Your intro message killed it for me.
Both Good, and bad artists post their stuff here for it to get viewed by people. Where you have the freedom to say "Hey this is cool" or "Hey this sucks". If your stuff is good enough to get noticed.
My problem is you basically posted to hold off on our coments or you will ban and block us? For what? Voicing an opinion? You will never be better until you accept your mistakes and flaws, but you will never know you have any mistakes or flaws if you do not listen... How will you ever improve otherwise? Just to show you that through all your hard work, your intro message ruined your film... lol It was good though...