Reviews for Here comes the Tankmen!

[LoneEagle]

Nice first submisson!

This is a pretty cool song. Superdrummer already noted some problems down like the marching sounds and all. The only thing that i have to add is that the trumpets volume was a bit too loud in the part towards the end, where everything else in the background is hard to hear.

On the good side, your song is diverse. The intro is nice, what i liked about it the most is the little 3 high notes the guitar plays. All in all it's a good song and you seem to know what you are doing so just keep on submitting songs.

Good luck with the contest man.

schwam responds:

Hey General Leo. Thnx a lot for the review. Like I wrote to SuperDrummer, my masteringskills just ain't the best. So I'm very greatfull for all the pointers I can get on that issue :)

Very cool that you noticed the 3 high guitar notes, because I really like that detail myself ;)

unts unts

[itsameyayo]

NICE!!!

Wow, for just submitting to Newgrounds, I can tell you're not a n00bie at all! You've got lots of diverse sound effects, and a great composition. Your ending rocks man! You too have a serious chance at getting into a Tankman submission, me thinks. Then again, a lot of us artists have a chance, since we're all pretty good.

A couple of pointers however...

-Your crash cymbal was irregular, it didn't ring out, it just stopped. Give it some suspension or something.

-The marching sound you had in there seems to distort with the snare. I don't know how to fix that one though, sorry : (

-Nice first submission, and into a MAC6 as well!!!

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

schwam responds:

Hey SuperDrummer, thnx a lot for the review. I really appreciate your pointers, and I agree with you. When it comes to mastering I'm really kind of n00bish, so I need this kind of feedback to improve. My biggest flaw when it comes to the clarity issue, I guess is that I love the multibandcompressor.

squuuueeeeeeezz ;)