You Should definitely finish this 'project'. It looks like it's going to be a great game when it's finished.
One thing that you should change, though, is the fact the jumping take forever and is absolutely horrible, in my opinion
Reviews for "1984 (Demo)"
I like the idea and everything ran smoothly for the most part but it lagged and the player will definitely want the latest version of flash to play. I crashed pretty hard.
Jumping needs reworked.
It was hard to see when someone was coming.
I feel this might be better as an overhead game instead of a platformer.
Dont see the point of the game, so as a demo its not even making it interesting but the graphics, movement and control is great. I like the idea but the title seems misleading if it is only loosely based. Many people will wonder why its called this. With no intro its a very open ending and I dont get the point of the paper. I also dont get why robots, and how walking behind boxes makes you invisible but hey it would work if there was some sort of game behind it or point. But with none, its just a move and go game. Also, with only one level that is very and possibly too simple, you dont leave much room to wonder or want to play the actual game.
You did a great job taking my favorite novel and making into a game! Would love to see the whole thing when its done :)