A bit of constructive criticism:
The story made sense to an extent
My main problem were small things.
Please color in the mouths. Although you can tell the difference, it just helps in the overall presentation. Watch continuity as well. Nobody likes a sudden irregular white border around the pc unless its being used in some weird 4th wall breaking joke or in some sort of way that makes sense. You can be random, but at the same time, you need to be smart. If you want to work on your animation, I suggest tutorials by Spazkidin3d on YouTube. It really helped with my animation, but do what you wish. I am only suggesting ideas to make you better.
Reviews for "JTV- Hacker"
JakesTV responds:
Holy crap i didnt even relize the pc error. I think it may of had to do with the layer it was on -_- I also just found this guy for tutorials on youtube (lilredheadcartoons)
It wasn't horrible but it was not good. and the sound hurt my ears
Ok, I'm seeing LITTLE improvement of your flashes, 1. You put an ending on it unlike your previous submission which had a loop. That was the only improvement. The flash was STILL a mess, the lip syncing was off, and at the ending, there was TWO replay buttons, you only need ONE. In other words it sucked less then your previous submission, which i voted 0.5/5 stars on.
Final rating: 1/5 stars
JakesTV responds:
Well I'm writting a script for a new flash right now. I will have a full lengthed intro rather thann a 2 second thing. I will see if my friend who is GREAT at drawing draw the people instead of me, the text will look much better(hopefully) and the sound will be higher quality.
i give it one for pie :p
Wow, also man I saw that in the guys first comment he said go to spazkids tutorials.. please listen to him. lilreadhead or whatever sucks and you won't get much out of him.
I'm just telling you the truth.
JakesTV responds:
Honestly when i made this one, i picked and chose what parts of lilredheads tutorials i wanted, I didnt follow all them. He does make good tutorials.