This was a very captivating story, and the music just added to the emotions of each part of it, I really enjoyed it and I hope to see more.
Reviews for "The Monster"
exninja123 responds:
thank you! :D
This is an awesome story so far! This should at least be 4 stars. People need to realize this is not a full on animated anime with color and effects. This is good for what it is. You should really get some more pictures though. What would be cool is if you put the words in a box below or above the scene so we are not seeing a black screen and just words. You want the viewer to see your awesome art skills not words on a black background. So my suggestion would be have words in a word box on the scene it's playing in. And if possible have mouths moving so we know who exactly is talking but that was just a random tidbit I could come up with. And grammar could be fixed up a bit. Just run through the scenes and read in your head does this sentence sound right. Easy fixes. Almost perfect :)
I loved the story plot though keep up the great work will be looking forward to what you have next. Have a nice day everyone.
You have been hunted :3
exninja123 responds:
Thank you very much!
Glad your enjoyed it! :)
This movie is amazing!
It's a great story line, beutifully drawn characters, good music, and a really good cliffhanger at the end.
I really enjoyed this, and look forwards to seeing more from you.
exninja123 responds:
thank you! :)
look's like your starting your own eps
called the monster
im looking forward to it
exninja123 responds:
thank you! :)
This is actually a side story though.
The real series is called "The Other Side".
Aren't you reading too many mangas?
that's cool, but ONLY do it for PLEASURE. or else...
I'm just warning you. Fell free to delete my comment if you want
exninja123 responds:
Lol, I hardly read mangas, but I do watch anime :)