No. PLEASE don't submit unfinished games!
For what it it, I would say- good job. :) 3/10
As far as remaining on the site, though, I've got to say that it's lacking. :\ 0/5
Newgrounds is for finished items. But people have been submitting tests, demos, parts, bits, and such for so long that it's started to get thru, and now people don't know what to do. This is a good example. It's kinda good, so should it get blammed? It's not a story, a finished game, a completed project; it's playable, but unfinished. Should it stay on here with the finished items? This is good, but it's totally lacking in what it needs to stay.
If it passes, this will forever be an unfinshed bit floating around here, since you won't ever finish it. You'll upload the finished item as a new file, and we'll have both here.
And that's one of the biggest problems Newgrounds has now. Unfinished bits and what to do with them. :\
Please only submit finished items. :)