It's not bad but its pretty short, I thought begining was pretty well done, you alo experimented with the perception quite a bit, which is always a question of trial and error...
As the focus is the weird looking light i'm assuming it became nothing more than dust which doesn't make sense.
All in all not bad at all..
Reviews for "Torture"
mrkenneh responds:
Thank you for watching :)
Yeah, even I can admit that the story narrative isn't very clear... Sorry about that :( Thank you for your comments though!