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Reviews for "War of the Shyguys"

Cute sprites

Sometimes you see alot of flashes and once in awhile you get someting differant and unique like the one you are presenting here, this one is pretty interesting and has some good visuals that really get you into it so for me this is a great flash here.But before i do continue on with the review, its been fun watching this you have some good and clever ideas in here.
Ok so i found this little flash of yours to be pretty cute, the sprites and sprite like action was notbad either rather cute as i have said, This one was kind of long but there was alot going on and that gave it some good "DEPTH" i really like how tis played out the graphics and visuals were pretty detailed though and thats what really pushed ne forward in seeing this so nice job indeed, all around and i hope to see more from you soon. After seeing and messing with this one i thought it was great, its a decent flash there is room for improvment, and you should think about adding some new stuff as mentioned below and even in the above review lines, it will be great for all, anywayskeep up the work i like the effort you put in sofar, and look forward to seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is were I suggest a few ideas that could help to improve on this, hope it does help, and remember it can only make things better. So dont take some of these ideas too light but consider them and just roll with it as these are some ideas that can help to make a better production on your movie. anyways here you go. This seemed kind of long and tended to drag on abit but it was good maybe cutting it down in a couple of parts might be ok.

The pacing during the final scene was really confusing. Plus, the voice acting felt off with most of the characters. The change in animation style was just annoying, too.

im not tryn to bash this but it will probably sound like it. make a better story next time and dont mix vector and sprites. id say its a poor attempt at emulating star fox. there are lots of sprites to be found on the web or you could always use the convert to vector function

2 stars for effort since its part of U.S schools grading curve nowdays

Eastbeast responds:

Your grammar tells me you must know a lot about grading curves. Sorry it didn't fit your tastes, if you think this is unoriginal in the spriting world, I would refrain from digging deeper into that area of NG.