It was ok u needed a play screen thing and maybe color (not knowing whether it was supposed to or not...) and the rest was pretty much great hope to see more anmation from u
-Pherow01
It was ok u needed a play screen thing and maybe color (not knowing whether it was supposed to or not...) and the rest was pretty much great hope to see more anmation from u
-Pherow01
thanks next time ill be sure to address the play button problem and thanks for the helpful review
i enjoyed it. it wasn't very special, but it was humble, simple, and very soft. i rather thought it was good for what it was.
im glad you enjoyed it
Okay, funny, but some of the slides that had dialogue went too fast and I couldn't read it. Not all, but there were some. Also, there should be a play button instead of it being on a loop.
i guess next time instead of doing the dialogue in one take i sound do each on separately so that way some of the pictures are not rushed, so that way my audience may read it. and i should have used the newgrounds upload play button, and that you for the helpful review vg!