Ah, paper is a beautiful medium and you do it some justice with this animation. The entrance walk was perhaps a little choppy for my liking, but i see our beloved MasterAardvark was an inspiration, and suspect the swifteness of your protaganists movements were intentional. Still, i feel a bit more inbetweening and some cushioning (or perhaps just better placed keyframes) could have given that entrance a bit more flow and continuity. The art was decent, though the square heads made me shudder at the thought of JordanDs hideous flashes. The concept was fun, well executed (lovely pacing) and had a satisfying punchline. Looking at the flash holisticly i must admit i enjoyed it and congratulate you on producing this fine piece of entertainment!
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Horsenwelles responds:
the entrance walk had about 4 frames cut from it because of the way i had to convert this into a wmv and then reimport it to save space. in fact, there were quite a few lot frames because of hardware issues =(
lets just say it was ridiculous to produce this at all. i worked all day on my birthday to make this lol.
okay i wont
Horsenwelles responds:
you better not! you saw what the movie said right? if its a movie it must be your moral guidance!
Made me chuckle. Meanwhile you should eat the apple after words, just cut open the corpse, rip open stomach, remove apple, clean apple, eat apple, and then post results.
Horsenwelles responds:
i wish we could get another volunteer
Pretty nice, lots of parts had some good, fluent animation, but others were somewhat stiff. Aside from its short running-time... it was done on paper... and that alone is a pretty big accomplishment, and pretty much saves everything, so I have to give this a decent rating anyhow.
Nice job!
Horsenwelles responds:
alot of the stiffness was because of the compression and the sadly not very good screen capture software. in retrospect i should've made it into a gif and used that, but i'm not sure how well it would have exported.
Sad story :( ...but true
Horsenwelles responds:
these things happen =(