Evaluation...Start!!!
Originality: It seems to have great influences from some of the more modern heavy metal of today. A nice, calm start with clean guitar, and strings, followed by a reverse cybmal build that was executed very nicely. And right there, we hear the heavy part. It's very nice, but the transition at 1:15 into the song wasn't great. It didn't have the intense pickup like at 0:48 into the song. When picking up back into the song with a transition, it's probably better to make the pickup more intense and well thoughtout.
Diversity: It's kinda like every other heavy metal song out there. Try some new stuff, perhaps? You'll never know what could happen until you add new things, try new things, and experiment with new things.
Clarity: Extremely professional, nice job : )
Effort: You took your time with this, but just keep checking your song, being meticulous with attention to every detail.
Nice Job!
-SuperDrummer146
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