I'm usually one for Sprite flashes, but NICE JOB! I really enjoyed this! I don't think I could come up with anything negative to say even if I tried! Keep it up!
I'm usually one for Sprite flashes, but NICE JOB! I really enjoyed this! I don't think I could come up with anything negative to say even if I tried! Keep it up!
I liked the flow of things in this animation
well for a test this was really good. hope to see more from you here on newgrounds
Most of the problems are in the first half. The music sets a pace that's a bit too frenetic right off the bat. Consider some sort of lead-in or fade. Also I found the action a little hard to follow at some points. Might want to add in a couple of short "pauses for breath" to let people take in the epicness they've just seen.
Overall, for something that started as a test, I think this is pretty decent. Nothing revolutionary, but I don't want my 30 seconds back either. Few tweaks and this could be a really solid short sequence.
Thanks a lot for this feedback, really helps! :D