Good buildup, and the style is interesting. The ending was a bit disappointing though, hearing the cheesy laugh and such. Keep it up with this style, there is alot you can do with this within the thriller genre.
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bennboy88x2 responds:
Appreciate the feedback. I posted this mostly to show my friends some of my school work. Yeah, the ending as definitely cheesy but pretty effective when I presented in class (haha). It was kind of a last minute extra. But thanks for watching!
Da Fuq was that your rendition of Little Red Riding Hood.
bennboy88x2 responds:
Sorta? But not really. I created this as a project for school. First time working with flash, we had to create a story. I came up with a simple, moody, concept that some will either enjoy, or walk away from.
Good video, but it could have used more plot. For example why was the she(?) lost? Why was the demon there? who lives/lived at the shack? Is the demon the previous occupant of the shack? Why didn't she(?) knock? I guess the last one doesn't matter really but more detail but otherwise very good!
P.S. Maybe voices next time!
bennboy88x2 responds:
Thanks man. Appreciate some of the ideas. If I had more time to work on it, I probably would've have made a little more extravagant. However, it was just for a school project so time was limited. Also, it was my very first time working with flash so it's definitely very amateur work: a few of the reasons why the story is so linear and simple. Once again, thanks for the suggestions and watching :)
well it was not much but worked xD good job m8
bennboy88x2 responds:
Thanks bud. It was for a school project: that's why it was so short. If I have time when the semester is over, I'll try and expand the detail. p.s. first time flash user right here ;)
very interesting animation seknique. but the execution of it was poor... the scare at the end would have been better withan actual animation of someone running up and covering the screen or something like that. but it was ok. keep up the good work. :)
bennboy88x2 responds:
Haha I know...it was just a school project and I wanted to show some of my friends. If had more time, I would've expanded the details further. Thanks for the feedback!