Most of the jokes are very overdone and lackluster, but I did get quite a few chuckles out of the Green-Male who was constantly being injured throughout the flash. I was, however, very entertained by the animation. It was fluid and simply looked fantastic! Keep using this style and with just a hint of writing, you'll have yourself a phenomenal series. Keep it up!
Reviews for "42 Boxes ACT 2"
Mutteo responds:
Mmm, well I suppose the corny puns and random outbursts aren't the most creative jokes. I do have a better grasp on the low brow entertainment. My Mutteo in NES Land is slightly more witty in terms of humor.
Considering I went to college for creative writing, hearing my script needs more polishing, is rather discouraging, but I guess you can't win them all. Thank you for your review.
The voice acting as good, but it doesn't seem to have a plot... at all.
Mutteo responds:
Of course it's not supposed to have a plot. It's a show about nothing. A comedy doesn't necessarily need one. Didn't you notice the 3 or 4 jokes the characters were making about the adventure not having one?
Personally, no laughs were had.
This is as funny as any cheesy tv sitcom; the only thing its missing is a laughtrack.
I get the feeling you didn't try too hard when writing the jokes themselves?
The animation was nice, on the other hand.
Mutteo responds:
This script is 5 yrs old, so to say I didn't "Try" is a bit of an insult really, but you're obviously not into that particular genre of comedy, so I can't say you lack a sense of humor, since cheesy sitcoms are something I am into, but I guess not for everyone. The mass majority of people I've talked with seemed to enjoy the humor, so you must be in the minority. I wonder what a person like you finds funny, as we are clearly in different worlds.
Sorry, not funny. Characters are too stereotypical and the plot is nothing but a bunch of random gags. If the jokes are the only plot then they need to be clever, which I don't think these are with the exception of maybe one or two.