It was good but....
The ending was a real cop out. I can tell that you were just tired of working on it and wanted to just end it there. Cop outs are bad. It makes the entire story just die. The rest was decent, but like I said the ending can make or break a movie. And this one breaks it. Try to work on the story a little next time so you can finish it.
two things
two things make this movie suffer, despite the fact that it has great graphics and atmosphere, and they're both related: plot and dialogue. The premise of the government was really pretty bad, way too simple, and the ending was horrible and there was no irony (it was about as good as if the guy had woken up and it was all a dream). the second was the actual dialogue... again, very simple, no wit whatsoever, and you know, it IS possible to get emotion from just text. hope that helps you in your future endeavor. again, don't be discouraged, i see you have great potential, but maybe you should get a screenwriter?
Awe Snap Shazam
Woot and all that. truly a worthy movie, and if your as boring as I am and you actualyl watch the prel;oader prepare to be stunned. Congrats.
cool
It mustve took you a long time to make such a cool movie. The ending wasent great though
that was amazing!
i dunno man but i love that kinda style movie, and it was the best, i loved every second of it! so awesome, u should be so proud of yourself! was the best~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
make a 2nd version, with more suspense and stuff, GJ man