I enjoyed this because of the abnormality.
Reviews for "Stainville Episode 2"
Alpha-Nuva responds:
i would expect you to. i don't think you'd enjoy it for its romantic tension.
Well overall this was awesome.
Great animation throughout, with some very strong posing and timing.
I think you did your best work in the begining. I liked the goose scene alot, and how you depicted the cops. voices were fitting, and the artwork strong, you had some nice shading in certain scenes as well.
Your visual gags were always funny, and some favorites include:
Gooche face, & the guy breaking into a yolk
Your writting was cartoony, but I think the bulk of this could be dimmed down some in the next episode. I think it was to long to be as strong as it should, try keeping the next one in between the two-three minute range with the strongest scenes/jokes prominent.
Just my thoughts, good work regardless, much better than most things winning daily 1st
Alpha-Nuva responds:
next ones will be waaaay shorter
Great improvements made especially in animation and sound and i love the randomness.
Fus ro dah!
Wow, this is one of the most bizarre submissions I've seen in awhile! Of course, it's also probably the best one I've seen all day! I was confused as to whether or not this would just be a music video or something. I guess I'm pretty glad it wasn't, because it turned out to be something truly great! My only criticism is that it does kind of drag on in the beginning. It takes awhile to really get the action going.
I just love how everything is so random in this and you have no clue whatsoever what's going to happen next. First, there's a guy who's turning into an egg and other guys who get shot and stabbed and stuff. I guess I should have seen the first one to understand this better. Given how insane it is, I doubt it could help much. Definitley worth checking out!
This is some weird shit, but probably the most interesting thing I've seen today!