I voted 5 but I'm going to go ahead and nit-pick this. Many things were very good and right on: The voice work, the setting, and the mood. Your art style doesn't really fit something as serious as this game. The background was fine and the night sky look good, but the round heads and big eyes gives it a cartoony flavor. The action was a bit slow paced for action. The two just stood there and traded blows. If you intention was suspense rather than action, then never mind. All in all it is a good animation and your work shows. Nicely done.