why don't you try adding a little more talking and some more tme into it that will help it be more how you say 'hooked' into it but other wise great loop :D
Reviews for "Magic sex [Art Trade]"
pretty damn good SHORT but pretty damn good...
Love it.
Started to play WoW after this, by the way , this is one of the best hentai's i ever seen ever!
Great job!
awesome a totaly WoW refrence i love it for the sounds and hot characters.