Actually this wasn't half bad. Looking at a lot of your past stuff, you can see major improvements in the facial expressions, animation frames and lip syncing. I did kinda find that the dialogue could have been better, it seemed a little dry and generic but this was mainly supposed to show off the the fight sequences which were pulled together pretty nicely.
With a little bit more practice (cuz I know college and real life complications gets in the way) you can be a master within no time.
It kind of makes me regret I didn't submit my demo for Keto in time though :( would have loved to contribute something. Caxx was a really nice choice as were Rudi and Twisted. Looking forward to more, keep it up!