great job!!
Reviews for "A Goomba's Life - Ep 4"
DemonicDragon93 responds:
Thanks bro. i was expecting the points to lower..didn't think it would start so fast
lol green donkey
DemonicDragon93 responds:
Haha. Glad someone caught that. Good Old Yoshi's island..what a great game....
This was another nicely put together sprite movie. The credit music reminds me I stopped watching Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt halfway through, I think I should try to get back to watching it all since I really liked watching it.
The sprites are not edited at all but that isn't a problem since without characters it is hard to give a story isn't it? The intro was pretty nice since it showed stuff from the previous three episodes that had happened to Robbie the Goomba and Yoshi.
The story seemed rather simple in that Yoshi left out one of his berries and a mouse got it. Robbie gets scared and falls down the stairs getting temporary amnesia and recovers. Then the mouse appears again at the end and Yoshi simply tears through their house trying to get his berry back. Short and humorous as always.
The voice acting here was great. The person who did Tails sounded pretty happy too. The music that was used gave a good feel of watching old retro characters actually being able to speak on old game systems had they allowed for voices at all. Credit music as I said earlier gave me a bit of a nostalgic feel and kind of makes you feel happy at the same time.
Overall, nice work on this episode. Wonder how the next episode will go.
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DemonicDragon93 responds:
Once again I thank you for your review. I can always count on the review crew to actually take the time to make a meaningful review. A few other people have as well but yours is done on a profesional level. So thanks once again. I hope you stick around for season 2. Which will be coming out later this year.
I will admit that this was rather entertaining. a little slow in areas with a few characters a little hard to understand, like the receptionist at the hospital and the Doctor. Jokes also seemed a little few and far between. an interesting concept though to take a Goomba and show his daily routine with Yoshi and Bud. My suggestions would basically only include work a little bit on a bit of the plot and make sure that your characters are understood. Also the Calligraphy subtitles, elegant and not a bad idea, but I would take into consideration the difficulty of reading Calligraphy for many people.
DemonicDragon93 responds:
Very professional review there Wham. Thanks for your kind yet honest review. I'll use that for Season 2.
So here's the lay-down. I really like the concept and the style of your flash. However, some of the sound was inconstant, Yoshi was really loud in some areas and in other parts you couldn't hear the characters at all. I also feel that there could be more emotion in the lines. This will help it feel more natural.
DemonicDragon93 responds:
Good advice thank you very much