Hmmmm needed more farts
Reviews for "Pokefarts"
I should've read the title, but I just kind of saw a Pikachu, and thought, "Hey, I'll watch that".
I looked at your page, your other videos are drawn well and have relateable humor and comedic timing. I'm not sure if this was supposed to be a joke on the fact that it looks like this website likes really dumb videos... but I don't think it worked.
If I am reviewing this legitly, I would say what's already been said. The animation was decent, but mostly tweens... and staying on a limited animated shot for over 10 seconds is a page from Family Guy's "Book of UnFunny Jokes". The music was great and well used.
Sorry man, I know you can do better.
Lambtaco responds:
I guess I should let the cat out of the bag. I was feeling nostalgic about Newgrounds of old, and how the portal was flooded with crap, so I decided to make the worst movie I could think of. I spent like 3 hours on this. I was going to do some more crappy flashes, but then I got bored.
-_- unique, but not in a good way.
well the drawings them selves were not too bad, but there was very little in terms of animation. As for the joke, it was not funny. Farts have an inheirted funniness to them but using that alone will make 2 year old laugh. Work on the build up of the joke and the timing, or maybe just avoid fart jokes altogether.
You really killed that joke off after the first couple seconds...lack of adequate humor. I did like the music though, if that counts :P