Very well put together, I enjoy the art style and thought the voice acting was decent overall.
Only problem I had was that I didn't think it was too funny, but I'd imagine you were working within the rules of your University project so it's excusable. X]
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Did the gnome steal her wallet ? haha, well the animation was simple and fairly well done. I think it could have been more exagerated, it worked but was basic solid posing. Could used some more squash and squish, but the poses read well anyways. Good shading, made the piece visually apeasing, and the textured images ie. the wallet were nice. A lil laggy but it dont matter. not that entertaining tho no offense. Good work regardless I guess!
Thanks man, wish I had longer to expand on some of it, I agree fully about the squash and stretch and what not, as for the lag, the contest said that videos should be uploaded to youtube, so the swf version really wasn't my top priority at the time. Thanks for the positives and constructive feedback!
This has the awful animation style of a British anime fan who doesn't know how to keep their British-cross-anime style out of their videos. Only British people make eyes and face shapes like that and have them do those kinds of animations. But there's way too much anime going on in the overall British style too.
If there's anything that Britain has taught us, its that you can't take "cartoons" seriously. It shows, and that is why I hate British-styled animation. Try pure anime, or the American styles of G.I. Joe, classic Disney (up to, and including, Lilo and Stitch) or Sponge Bob. Other than that, make up your own, tasteful animation style. This British animation style is tasteless and ugly and starting to get on my nerves...
But I know you guys are just going to get offended anyway. I'm not insulting a person-- just an art form. It's not like I'm actually doing a malicious, uneducated bashing. So don't censor me.
That was just too contradictory to even care
