Seems like a hack job.
The flash still needs a lot of work.
The animations could use some more pacing, slow it a bit down so we know what is going onscreen.
If you're really going to use sound effects, make sure they sync up with the action.
Maybe voice the characters, give them some sort of life. I have no reason to even remotely like the characters as they are, and hastily written scribbles of text does nothing.
Finally the loop. Seems like a small detail, but don't let your flash loop, unless it adds to the flash. It's nice to be able to choose when to hit play.