Great animation, haven't read the fanfic myslef, so i dont know how accurate it is, but still very good.
By the way, i personally think that if any of the ponies turn out to be psychotic killing machines it'll be Fluttershy rather then Pinkie, not sure why everyone seems to think that Pinkie'd be the bloodthirsty one, just because somepony is perky doesn't mean they do coke and eat people.