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Reviews for "Dot Dot Square"
Sketchy responds:
Thank you very much mate :)
oh wow.
Yup another one. :)
Sketchy responds:
Thanks for the review mate :)
Well Done
Well done, nice work with the word flow.
The link to the original "Dot Dot Dot" Doesn't work.
Sketchy responds:
Thanks man for notifying me, and thanks for the review :)
Well-coordinated
It's quite obviously a parody/tribute to the original 'dot dot dot'. It shows.
However, like many tribute-flashes, it has a distinct drop in quality.
The Intro animation looked gimmicky and off-centred, and poorly timed, some of the transitions were compositionally awful. The voice-acting was, whilst good, noticeably sub-par to the first work. It lacks confidence, which severely impacts fluency and artistic intonation.
Plus there was a little white line on the left side of the screen the whole time - that bugged me a bit, too.
Don't get me wrong though, it's still an enjoyable, well-coordinated piece of work, with a good message that's long overdue around here - needless to say, most people won't even notice it's them that's being ridiculed. Although I believe I do notice a slightly heightened attempt at literacy in the local reviews, so perhaps there's still hope.
It's a nice vid. But I'd still forgive you if you labeled it a prototype and made an improved version.
In fact I'd commend you for your perfectionism, because I know I'd certainly not bother working on this beauty anymore after publishing if it were mine.
It isn't though, and I hope you understand what I mean.
Cheers!
~Glun
Sketchy responds:
Thanks for the review :) And yeah, my internet here in Australia is ridiculously slow and I have not yet watched this video no Newgrounds, so bugs I cannot fix. But thanks for the advice mate, and next time this will be noted :)
I see big letters, lols and a great voice.
Good job done. The voice is well done and the text is as funny as always.
Pretty much a perfect sequel or parody or whatever you want to call it.
What else can I say?
Good job.. Deserves the rating.
It shows how comedy is hidden within the audiance and all that kind of deep stuff.
...I wonder how a flash movie would be made by an audiance.
Maybe an expiriment you guys could do like give a subject.
Say the word: Cheese. And let the audiance ramble about it then make the movie of CHEESE.
Meh we will see.
Sketchy responds:
Haha, thanks for the advice, and yeah, we'll see what happens. Thanks for the review too mate :)