Nice tribute
It's a very well made tribute to the original Dot Dot Dot.
About the animation - well i understand not everyone is good at typography (me included) but you could kinda plan it better and make text transitions more smooth - but i guess you rushed to meet the deadline.
Kpheeyat did a good job voice acting here - i might suggest him some mastering tutorial or changing recording space - but i will tell him that once i see him lol ;D
Here's an 8 for you guys