Pretty good, but
You are throwing a lot of characters and information at the audience for a first episode. If you added fight scenes you could theoretically stretched this first episode out to 2 or 3 episodes.
But overall, it's very good. I like the dialogue and the artwork doesn't bother me as much as it seems to bother other people.
Looking forward to seeing the next episode.
Pretty good
Has the potential for a good series. Things is I am not going to be able to remember all the names that were mentioned just there. I don't think the main character's name was mentioned....Good animation, but art lacked in some parts.
haha yeah it is a clusterfuck of names - - i hope they will grow more familiar over time!
thanks for watchin though
...Art needs work...
Honestly the music and voices where not that bad and I had no problems with them; however, the art is not good and the story could use some work. The story just seems to be too simple at this current point and the way the characters are introduced is poor but since this is the first episode I will not criticize that factor too much for it is just the opening and I can understand how opening something can be troubling. The art has no excuse though, the art is poorly done throughout the entire episode and almost convinced me to close the video because how much the art was ruining the episode. I had to stop at one point and think of how this would be if it was just audio without the art and I found it to be much better. The art has proportional problems all over the place. The face, although still bad, I will not be too harsh on because it could be considered "unique" for its style but still has little feel for the proportions of the face. The bodies on the other hand were often disgruntled and distorted in the fashions that they were provided. The shoulders were often found to be tense, the arms often just stubs, and the chest found to have some odd shape as if the top magically was wider than the bottom. Their were numerous other problems associated to the proportions of the body but not as bad. Overall this would do fine if the artist could fix the problems and make the art cleaner and more professional.
yes i am aware my proportions and anatomy needs a lot of work - - but i'm not a professional - i'm just a guy who does this as a hobby and i need to practice just like anyone - - but honestly - if you thought the art was THAT bad...i don't know how you watch much on this site.
Effort!
Wow, this probably took ages to complete. Everybody giving this a low score clearly tried animation or just trolling. Either way they are inconsiderate assholes for not appreciating effort.
10/10 for effort
7/10 for detail
If this had more detail then you should actually charge us to watch this clip
Great
Nice animation but you could have put a little more detail. Nice and original too.