Well written
For a first attempt, this is a great, static typed game. However, some of the links/choices didn't execute properly. For example, if I say I'm a woman, I'm instantly shunted to the Colonel's conversation options, with the first option completely nonexistent.
Still, this is excellent for a first work; look forward to seeing more!
Nice storyline. It was kind of funny that I solved it in less than 30 seconds.
I guessed.
As soon as the game loaded, I immediately selected the 'Solve the Crime' option and selected the culprit. I got a good chuckle out of it.
Well done
This is quite good for a first project. Keep it up!
I give it a 6.
Not a bad game, but I solved it on the first try without asking anyone any questions.
Keep it up though. I'm sure you can create an even better game in the future.