I think it's awesome.
I just wanted to add, because the comment before this said that the cum was unrealistic, and you said you were wondering how to make it look more real. I think various in thickness, imitated through shading could add to its 'realness'
Otherwise, I really like the different possible cumshots, it really adds to how kind of replayable the game is. I just kinda wish you could continue to make a bigger and bigger mess on her. =p
Can't wait for the final product.