Needs work.
The animation is alright but the flash ends after 2 seconds, I don't know if that was intentional or not but if you had made it a loop people would like it a little more and if you hit play again it re-plays the music in addition to the music already playing which is annoying.
yes, sorry , I wanted to make' it better and longer but my computer is crap, I finished this animation in coupe of hours but it took me ages to just copy after that some frames and save it :(
Well designed.... but it's too short.
The music loops fine, but the actual Epic Sax Girl plays for only a few frames, then cuts off.
um, What?
That was just too short to get anything out of it. less than a few seconds. I hadn't even figured out what was going on and then the movie was over.
The art was potentially good. Could use some cleaning up, such as erasing some of the unnecessary lines used to craft her form around her fingers and some of the shading was a little heavy. It would have looked better it you had used a gradient effect on the larger portions of the shading on her back and thighs.
Gave a two due to the fact that the flash was so short that I didn't even get to see what it really was without pressing play multiple times. You have good potential this I can see but this was clearly not your best effort. I hope to see more and hope my review was helpful to you.
tnx ^_^ , I think I will delete this one :)
It'll pass...
But not because it's good, but because you drew her in skimpy underwear. If she wasn't naked, it might not pass, but you went the easy route and made her mostly naked just to sneak your way to a passing submission.
Truth is that this isn't anything spectacular. It's a nice drawing, but it's like 5 drawings on a loop and nothing more.
If you want cheap and easy, then put naked girls in your submissions. You can draw a stick figure with boobs and Newgrounds will pass it. That doesn't mean it's good.
If you want to be respected as a good flash artist, make your animation and story good enough that you don't need boobies and titties and thong underwear and bimbo chicks to get your movie to pass.
good art, bad flash work (sound and looping).