WHOO!! Triplet breaks!!
Great friggin job dude.
The groaning threw me off a little, but then I realized it was your voice and my heart filled with love (and that's nothing compared to what filled my PENOR!! OMGZORZZ)
But it still cuts through the mix too much and has some natural mic distortion - I'd increase distance a bit when you're recording...
Anyway, mean lyrics to a mean song, I really like that over-the-top fuzz on the bass, especially in the wah wah effects.
And then there was a triplet drum break!!! That should've returned a time or two man, it makes me jizz! Fo jizzle!
Good going on the resigned part with the strings too, really adds to the suspense.
By all means, submit a Tankmen song. You have my full blessing :)
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